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托福写作如何学

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托福 写作如何学

托福写作如何学?托福独立作文内容充实逻辑性好、语法准确是拿到高分的重要因素。在限时考试中过于关注语言,提分效果可能还不如前两点。今天,小编给大家带来托福写作的技巧。

1、针对不同话题思考自己的观点

经过了范文学习的过程,就可以开始针对不同话题的文章思考自己的观点,列出提纲,寻找supporting details。这样,在做好了充分的准备后,就可以有准备地开始真正的练笔阶段。特别要说明的是,如果同学们没有好的模拟写作小软件,建议使用windows自带的写字板,切忌使用Microsoft Word等具有纠错功能的软件进行模拟写作。在练笔的最初阶段可以不计时间,但熟悉了写作的流程后一定要每次写作都计时,模拟真实的考试环境。

2、培养听力和复述能力

Integrated writing部分是听力和写作的结合,不需要大家发表个人观点,因此考察的是听力能力和复述的能力。在听力前的三分钟要认真阅读题目中的文字,文字中会有3个支持文字观点的论据,听力则会针对这三个观点逐个展开。对于听力部分,同样提醒大家要多做笔记,记住细节,在作文展开中体现出来。因为综合写作的模式比较固定,因此可以提前准备好模版和固定的句式。注意,一篇高分的综合写作一定有变化多样的句式,这个在我们准备模版的时候一定要体现出来。

3、积累出色词汇、句型和文章结构

最开始练习independent writing时,同学们往往会遇到不知如何下手的问题。因此,在练习的初期,可以先阅读一些新托福写作的范文、相关书籍;精读里面的文章,注意作者的文章结构和展开方式,同时积累例子和细节。这样,我们对于独立写作的套路就有了基本的了解。另外在关注文章的展开方式时,我们同样可以学习范文里的句式结构和高深的词汇。并不是鼓励大家抄袭,而是真正地掌握较高级的句子结构和较复杂的词汇,这些都会给我们的作文加分。

托福写作如何学

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写作技巧一

“there be句型”变为被动语态

试比较

1. She used to be indifferent to the outside world, but an interloper changed her.

2. Her indifference to the outside world was changed by and interloper.

把but后面的句子改为短小插入语

试比较

1. Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novelsand literature analyses, but she hardly succeeded in any of these endeavors at the very beginning.

2. Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novels and literature analyses—all with little initial success.

把but后面部分改为更紧凑的从句

试比较

1. It was meant to be a brief parting, but it turned into a long, lingering one.

2. What was meant to be a brief parting turned into a long, lingering one.

第二句读起来更加集中、紧凑,并且去掉了"It was, but it…”等鸡肋部分。

积累一些可能替换but的连接词

e.g. however/nonetheless/nevertheless/yet/whereas/while...

试比较

1. Once arriving home, she starts to review all the notes, not necessarily because the teacher requires her to do so,but because she encourages herself to study hard.

2. Once arriving home,she starts to review all the notes, as much from the requirement of the teacher,as from herself-encouragement.

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写作技巧二

一.英语基本功

在托福独立写作中,并没有相关的阅读和听力内容可以帮助考生组织自己的语言,考生在答题的时候能凭借的仅仅是自己的英语基本功。在考试中,很多考生因为对于词汇和语法不熟悉,所以不能恰当的使用词汇来表达自己的观点,文章中的句子和句子之间逻辑的关系混乱。

建议:考生在备考托福写作的过程中,首先要重视托福词汇的备考,对于基础比较薄弱的考生来说,要从四级词汇开始背起,然后逐步过渡到六级词汇和托福词汇的备考。建议考生在备考词汇的时候要制定一些背词汇的计划表,有步骤的去背诵。其次,考生要重视语法的积累,要重点掌握被动语态,强调句型,非谓语动词,从句的使用方法。

二.中式翻译

英语毕竟不是我们的母语,很多考生在学习英语的时候习惯性的用中式思维来表达自己的观点,比如很多考生用black society来表达黑社会的含义,用eight hang来表达八卦的意思。但是判卷的考官并不是中国人,考官并不明白考生真正想要表达的意思是什么,考生在托福写作考试中,很容易因为这样而出现低分的现象。

建议:针对有这种情况的考生,小编认为,如果想要改变这种现状,就一定要多听多看。建议考生通过一些经典的美剧比如《生活大爆炸》,《老友记》,或者是一些经典的美国大片比如《阿凡达》,《风月俏佳人》等等来增强对于英语中语境的熟悉程度,提升语感。

三.套路化明显

很多考生在写托福写作的时候会背诵模板,在考试的时候,不管遇到了什么题目都生搬硬套的使用模板,这样在考官判卷的时候,很多作文框架千篇一律,如出一辙,极大的降低了考生的分数。

建议:建议考生在备考托福阅读的时候,每天进行英文写作练习,用英文来写日记,在写作的过程中增强自己的写作能力。

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写作技巧三

一、可以先表明自己的立场,再阐述原因

Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies, but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.

Contrary to the statement’s premise, my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies, because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.

二、比较新颖、有创意的开头

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.

As a saying goes, “God helps those help themselves”, which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned, I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.

三、可以适当的复述一下题目,然后稍作让步,再表达自己的观点和立场

“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests, their leisure activities, even their appearance way from the work place.”

The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests, recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personal lives of some people are largely determined by their work, in my view it would be a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation, the extent to which occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work, and how central the work is to one’s sense of self.

“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”

I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings, as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits, I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes, moods, and even life styles.

四、新托福写作可以以提问方式开头,阐述自己的观点,再表明自己的立场

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change, many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker, not to government or to business.”

As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete, who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjustWhile individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work, both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.

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