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社会类雅思写作范文之公众健康问题

  社会类雅思写作范文之公众健康问题,为帮助大家更好准备雅思考试,现在陆续为大家提供雅思作文考试新真题和范文及其译文,希望对大家雅思考试有所帮助,一起来看:社会类雅思写作范文之公众健康问题。

  【考题解析】
  考题重现:Some people believe that public health should be improved by increasingthe number of sports facilities, while others believe that it has little effectsand other measures should be taken to solve this problem. Discuss bothviews and give your opinion.
  核心词汇:public health, sports facilities, other measures
  文章结构:辩论型片面式话题。

  【9分范文】
  Which way is the most efficient way to improve people's health? Some people believe thatgovernments should build more sports facilities in residential areas in order to provide morechances for citizens to do exercises. Heothers believe that there arc other ways to do so.Personally, both sides of the issue should be taken into consideration.
  Admittedly, sports facilities have their own unique benefits. Firstly, it is possible for people todo practice in their spare time no matter where and when they want to do so. In other words, ifpeople want to do sports regularly, their healthy condition can be improved generally. Secondly, itis the government's duty to do so. Governments have obligations to ensure the public health asone of their missions. Without the investment of governments, it is impossible for any individualto build many facilities in the city. A study conducted by Peking University in 2009 impliedthat the investment from government for sport was 92.3%, while the investment from individualswas only 7.7%.
  However, the definition of health has many other meanings. And there arc two main sections:physical ones and psychological ones. For physical aspect, people should have the habit of having healthy foods such as “green” foods like seafood and fruits. In other words, it isimportant for governments to put healthy awareness into people's daily life. For psychologicalaspect, overwork and cumulative pressure from both work and life make people feel tired. Torelieve one's pressure to some extent is a good way to keep healthy. Therefore, the governmentshould draw up some laws to limit the working time for its citizens.
  In summary, both sports and other ways arc important for people to keep healthy. Therefore, tosolve this problem more efficiently and effectively, governments and experts should reconsiderthis issue more insightfully and prudently.
  【范文译文】
  哪种方式能够更有效地改善人们的健康呢?有人认为政府应在居民区兴建更多的体育设施为居民提供更多的锻炼机会。然而。还有人认为有更多其他方式来改善人们的健康。我觉得这个问题须全面讨论。
  必须承认,体育设施有其与众不同的优势。第一,人们在休闲时间,无论在任何时间、地点都可锻炼身体。也就是说,如果人们能有规律地运动,就一定能逐步增强体质。第二,这是政府的责任。政府机关有义务把维护公众健康作为自己的一项任务去完成。如果缺少政府投资,仅凭个人是不可能在城市建立很多体育设施的。北京大学在2009年的一项调查表明。体育设施的投入比例中政府占92.3%,而个人仅仅占到7.7%o然而,健康的定义不仅限于此。定义可以分为两大类:身体和心理健康。对于身体健康而言,人应该养成良好的饮食习惯,多吃一些像海鲜和水果一样的绿色食品。
  换句话说。重要的是政府应该将健康意识灌输到人们的日常生活当中。对于心理健康而言,无论是生活还是工作方面的过度工作和日积月累的压力都会使人感到疲倦。从某种程度上讲,减轻压力是保持健康的一个好办法。所以政府应该立法来限制人们的工作时间。
  总之,体育设施也好,其他方式也罢,对人保持健康都很重要。因此。想要有效地解决此类问题。政府和专家就应该更深入而谨懊地重新考虑问题。

  【亮点句型】
  sb. has obligations to do sth.
  某人有做某事的义务
  Governments have obligations to ensure the public health as one of their missions.
  a study conducted by... implied that…
  一项由……进行的研究表明·,·…
  A study conducted by Peking University in 2009 implied that the investment from government for sport was 92.3%, while the investment from individuals was only 7.7%.
  the definition of sth. has many other meanings
  某事的定义不仅限于此
  However, the definition of health has many other meanings.
  it is important for sb. to put the awareness into sb.
  某人将一种意识灌输给某人是很重要的
  In other words, it is important for governments to put healthy awareness into people's daily life.
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