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社会类雅思写作范文之人类发展历程

  社会类雅思写作范文之人类发展历程,为帮助大家更好准备雅思考试,现在陆续为大家提供雅思作文考试新真题和范文及其译文,希望对大家雅思考试有所帮助,一起来看:社会类雅思写作范文之人类发展历程。

  【考题解析】
  考题重现:A hundred years ago, people thought that human race was steadily improving inevery area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty in this case. In which areasdo you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areasdo you think we still need to make progress?
  核心词汇:human race, made progress, still need to make progress
  文章结构:辩论型对称式话题。

  【9分范文】
  To rethink the progress and the regress of human beings throughout history, what should be donefirst is to define success and failure clearly. To be frank, mankind does make some changes innatural and social environment, but many untouched areas await more explorations in the future.
  What can never be neglected in human civilization is technological advances. Firstly, in termsof health care, in recent decades, researchers and experts have gone to great lengths to diagnoseand cure some unknown disease such as SARS, HINI and some forms of cancers. This is ofremarkable significance to human beings because it prolongs their lives. Secondly, in the area oftelecommunication, telegram, telephone and television were invented, and now with new tricksknown as mobile phones as well as the Internet, all of which enable people to get in touch withothers freely and instantly for low costs. Lastly, in the aspect of transportation, man has broughtout a new world. Cars, trains, and air jets make the world a global village.
  However, none could live only with legacies. When it comes to future developments, somethingwith flaws should always be remembered. Firstly, art and culture have had little progress in thelast 100 years. What we indulge in elaborating on is something from ancient times. Modem artand culture, sometimes, arc misshapen and vulgar. What's the worse is that living in a money-oriented society, it is easy for people to degenerate without faith and belief. Oln this respect,people only concentrate on material instead of spiritual enjoyment.

  To sum up, we may take pride in the progress of materials for a moment, and a moment is longenough. We have no other choices, but carry the legacy and burden from ancestors and then moveon.
  【范文译文】
  回顾一下整个人类历史长河的进步和倒退,首先要搞清楚的就是成功与失败的定义。说实话,人类确实在自然和社会环境方面做出过一些改变。但未来,还有很多未涉及的领域有待开发。
  我们不能否认的是人类在科技方面确实做出了一些成就:第一在医疗领域,近几十年来,研究者和专家极其努力地诊断和治疗了一些未知疾病。如非典、甲流以及一些癌症。这在延长人类寿命上有着显著的意义。第二。在通讯领域,如电报、电话和电视的发明和现如今的新玩意儿如手机和因特网,都让人能够以低廉的价格随时随地与他人进行自由地进行交流。第三。在交通领域,人类进入了一个全新世界。汽车、火车和飞机让世界成为了一个地球村。
  然而,没人能只靠遗产就可以活下去。谈到未来发展,还有很多不足应引起关注。第一。艺术和文化在近100年来几乎停滞不前。我们津津乐道的都是些古时候的东西。现代艺术和文化总是扭曲和庸俗的。更糟糕的是,生活在这样一个拜金主义的社会中,人很容易因没有信仰而堕落。在这个层面上,人关注的仅仅是物质而不是精神方面的享受。
  总之,我们在物质方面的进步是值得骄傲那么一下的,但也仅一下而已。我们别无选择,只有背负起之前的遗产和祖先给予的重负,戮力前行吧。

  【亮点句型】
  A awaits B in the future。
  未来某时A还在等待B。
  To be frank, mankind does make some changes in natural and social environment,but many untouched areas await more explorations in the future.

  this is of remarkable significance to sb./sth.
  这个对于某人或某事有显著意义。
  This is of remarkable significance to human beings because it prolongs their lives.

  what we indulge in elaborating on is sth.
  我们津津乐道的是……
  What we indulge in elaborating on is something from ancient times.

  sb. will only concentrate on A instead of B
  某人只是关注A而不是B
  In this respect, people only concentrate on material instead of spiritual enjoyment.
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