关于儿童广告的雅思作文范文

　　Some people think that advertisements shouldn' t be targeted at children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些人认为不应该制作针对儿童的广告，你同意还是不同意呢?

　　Whether there should be a ban on TV adverts aimed at children has long been a controversial issue. I definitely agree with the view that there should be such a ban based on the following reasons.（广州易藤教育资深老师解析：开头第一句交待了问题的背景，第二句中提出了作者的观点，即赞同禁止针对儿童的广告。）

　　Firstly, exploitive adverts brainwash children into becoming eager consumers.That is because companies deliberately encourage them to be materialistic so that they associate happiness with purchasing power and possession of particular goods, which is not only detrimental to the children themselves, but more importantly, harmful to the well-being of the society as a whole. Actually, many countries, such as Sweden, have banned the marketing campaigns to the under-12s.（广州易藤教育资深老师解析：主体部分的第一段提出了第一条原因，该段中使用了so that引导的目的状语从句以及which引导的定语从句，定语从句中还用到了not only…but…句式，一气呵成。）

　　Secondly, adverts specifically to children are unethical because they have little or no money of their own and thus have to persuade their parents to buy the products. Rather than advertising directly to parents, companies use a “nag and whine” campaign that may lead to bad relationship between parents and children. They rely on pest power to make adults spend money they do not have on things they do not want to buy. Adverts which present products to children as “must-have” are also family divisive, making children whose parents cannot afford them appear inferior, causing the feelings of frustration as well as leading families into debt.（广州易藤教育资深老师解析：后一句用到了两个定语从句和两个表示结果的现在分词短语，句子的灵活使用值得学习。）

　　Some people who insist on no-ban policy might argue on the grounds that adverts are the means by which most television stations are funded. If adverts to childen are forbidden, TV revenues will be reduced. This is not in the public interest. Also, this view lacks validity because broadcasting is increasingly diversed, with state-funded, commercial and subscription channels all available in most countries. Restricting adverts a little, therefore, will not make much difference to the financial condition of broadcasters.（广州易藤教育资深老师解析：句式Some people who insist on…might argue on the grounds that…可以用在任何话题的文章中，用来表述理由。）

　　In a word, banning adverts targeted at children is nothing but a must, because it is the most critical factor in making children have the right perspective of material things and maintaining a healthy relationship between parents and children.（广州易藤教育资深老师解析：后一段做出总结，重申作者的观点。）。