雅思流程类作文范文

雅思考试流程图来袭,烤鸭们要淡定,找好描述的逻辑顺序和链接手段,应对流程图才会比较轻松哦。那你知道雅思流程类作文范文有哪些吗?下面是小编收集整理的一些雅思流程类作文范文,大家一起来看看吧!

雅思流程类作文范文篇一:蚕的生活史及丝绸服饰的生产流程

【总述】The diagram illustrates the main stages in the life cycle of silkworm and the procedure of silk cloth making.【两图关系】From this diagram it can be seen that the cocoons are necessary raw materials used for silk cloth production.

【分述流程 1】In the first stage, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.

【分述流程 2】When it comes to the production of silk cloth, once the cocoons are selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.

【小结】Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.

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雅思流程类作文范文篇二:房屋设计方案

这两个流程图展示了不同气候下的房屋设计方案。

These two diagrams show the design of house from different weather: cool and warm respectively

如图所示,在天气寒冷的时候,应该选择角度比较高屋顶以吸收更多的阳光来增加室内温度。与此同时,在房间的内层安置保温材料,用来存贮收集来的热量。并且要在房屋的外侧安装insulation,来减少热量的散失。这样就可以保证尽可能高的室内温度。

As can be seen in the first graph linked to cool climate, roof with a high angle should be adopted to increase the indoor temperature by absorbing more sunshine. Meanwhile, a building material that can store heat is also needed within the house, coupled with the outside insulation, a material that can reduce heat loss. In this way, we can keep as much heat as possible inside the house in cold weather.

而在天气比较热的时候,白天和夜间的处理方式有所不同。屋顶应该采用反射性比较强的材料来避免吸收更多的热量同时屋檐需要延长一部分,获取跟多的阴影部分以确保室内温度降低。外层保温材料仍然需要安装,减少冷空气的流失。在白天注意关闭好窗户并将其遮盖起来,避免更多的阳光进入室内。这样就可以尽最大的可能避免热量进入并且保存冷空气在室内。而到了晚上只需要将窗户打开,让室内空气移出并且容室外的冷空气流入房间,降低室内温度。

In contrast, when it is hot, the designing method is divided into two modes: day and night respectively. In order to lessen more heat intake, a reflective material should be adopted to build the roof, which is overhung for more shade. The insulation is also required to reduce the loss of cold air. What is worth mentioning in the day is that windows must be kept closed and covered, to avoid warm sunshine, while at night the windows should remain open, releasing the stored heat during the daytime and exchanging for more cool air.

总之,不同的气候条件下的房屋设计方案也都会有所不同。

Overall, housing design should differ in cool climates and warm climates.

雅思流程类作文范文篇三:三文鱼的一生

话题:The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of the salmon, from birth to maturity.

It is clear that there are six* main stages as the salmon develops from egg to mature adult. We can also see that salmon spend time in three distinct locations during the cycle, moving from river to estuary to ocean and then back upstream.

Salmon begin their lives in rivers where the adult fish lay and incubate their eggs. After emerging from eggs, the young salmon spend the next stage of their lives being reared in freshwater areas. Then, at some point in their development, the fish swim downstream to river estuaries where rearing continues.

Following the estuary rearing period, the maturing salmon migrate to the ocean, where they eventually become fully grown adults. Finally, the adult fish travel back upstream to spawning areas of rivers; here they reproduce and lay their eggs, and the life cycle begins anew.

雅思小作文流程图的写作技巧及应对策略:

第一,要用好表示顺序的连接词(Sequencing Words)

既然是流程图,就不可避免的要说明过程的各个步骤和先后顺序,在这里,大家要注意几个词。例如,表示过程我们通常用“process”或 “procedure”,过程的各个阶段和步骤我们可以用“stage”或“step”来描述。在谈到第一个步骤时我们可以用连接词“In the first place”、“To begin with”、“In the first stage”等引出。在进入中间的步骤时可以用“Then”、“Next”、“After this/that”等,最后一个步骤可以用“Finally”或“Lastly”。当然,如果有一些平行的步骤我们也可以用“At the same time”、“Meanwhile”等来引出。

以上这些词如果用的太频繁也会使文章显得较为单调,我们可以使用从句的方法使各个步骤的描写自然地衔接在一句话中。例如今年1月14日考到的一次流程图(glass bottle recycling)有一句话就可以这样写:

When the cleaning is done, the bottles are conveyed to a glass factory where they are cut into glass pieces which are then poured into a furnace.

上面的句子用了when/where/which三个连词,就把玻璃瓶回收的三个步骤”cleaning- cutting –heating巧妙地连接在了一起。

第二,要学会使用被动语态

流程图写好的第二个关键是被动语态的使用。流程图表现的是客观的工作流程或事物发展的过程。因此,我们可以尽量避免用“We should/must/need to do sth.”的主动语态,改为“Sth. Should/must/needs to be done”这样的被动语态。被动语态和情态动词的恰当搭配,可以使文章显得更具有客观、和学术化色彩。前面玻璃瓶回收的例句中,不论是从句还是分句都使用了被动语态。在比如,今年6月24日又考了一道流程图(cement production),其中有两句话可以这样写:

The production of cement starts in a mixer, where limestone gravel and sand are converted into a mixture, which is then fed into a crusher. Here the mixture is ground into cement powder, and then is passed through a rotating heater.

上文中用到了convert、feed、grind、pass这四个动词的过去分词构造了被动语态,使过程的描写显得非常专业。

第三,引言段和结尾段的重要性

在流程图的引言段和结尾段写作中可以适当进行过程的阶段划分和总结,使文章的构思上一个层次,摆脱“流水账”的俗套。例如还是1月14日流程图,引言段可以这样写:

This diagram illustrates the recycling process of glass bottles. The whole process is a cycle which can be divided into three main stages.

再来看一道模拟题,是关于植物的光合作用和人类的呼吸过程,在最后,可以这样总结:

In summary, plants, humans and animals provide services for each other. Humans and animals need the oxygen that plants produce in order to stay alive. When humans and animals breathe out, they provide the carbon dioxide that plants need in order to survive.

这样就把两方面的过程完美地结合在了一起。

第四,要善于“绕开”专业的概念表达

在流程图中,有时不可避免的会出现一些比较专业的概念,考场上一时想不出对应的英文,这时候要善于利用已知的简单词汇,试着把这些“专业” 的概念用简单的方式表达出来。例如,不知道怎样表达“房间通风”(ventilation)这个概念,我们可以说“air moving through the house”来说明,不知道怎样说“斧头”和“锯子”(axe and saw)我们就用“special tools”来绕过,虽然不是描述得很准确,但总比不写或写错了要好。

总之,流程图的写作没有大家想想得那么难,在调整心态,掌握了以上几点原则后,适当进行一些专门的训练,特别是历届考过真题的实战演练,相信考生在考场上一定会应对自如。

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