关于电视暴力的雅思作文范文

　　Some programs on TV are full of violence. This is having quite some negative influences on individuals and even on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？

　　一些电视节目充满了暴力，这对个人甚至社会造成了很多负面影响。在多大程度上你同意或反对此观点呢？

　　With the rapid development of science and technology, television, as a powerful invention in the 20th century, is becoming an indispensable tool in people's life. People can learn about what is happening around the world simultaneously by watching TV. However, at the same time, some programs with shots or scenes of violence begin to flood the TV screens. Young individuals, as well as the whole society, are unavoidably affected. In my point of view, most of these impacts are negative.

　　To begin with, youngsters will imitate the scenes and actions of violence and crimes in TV programs, thus becoming criminals. No one would ever deny the inclination and ability of the youth to imitate. Seeing such kind of shots, especially when they are exposed to too much of such scenes, they would think that these are commonplace things in real life. As they know little about the law, they won't be able to know that these are crime committing and hence, they will just copy what they see and eventually break the law. There are simply too many such kind of examples in our actual life that we can just save the trouble to list any here.

　　Likewise, such kinds of programs have negative influence on adults as well. Although adults possess higher ability to distinguish right from wrong and they have a stronger awareness of law, to any person,once he or she is exposed to something too much, he or she will just become numb and will only take it too much for granted. In this way, the seed of danger is sowed. Indeed, many cases of adult crimes were the result of film or TV influences.

　　After we have discussed the negative influences of such programs on people, their impact on our society is all but too obvious. Because society is made up of people who are negatively influenced, we simply cannot bear to imagine what the entire society will be like. In fact, many real-life cases reveal that a lot of criminals learned how to rob a bank, burglarize a household and even commit a murder from TV. To prevent such things from happening, security department of the government has to hire more policemen to maintain order, thus aggravating the financial burden of the country and the government.

　　Apparently, scenes and shots of violence in TV programs are indeed harmful to individuals and society；therefore, they should be strictly censored and controlled.

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　　随着科学技术的发展，电视作为20世纪的重大发明，正在成为人们生活中不可或缺的工具。通过看电视，人们可以同步知道世界正在发生的事情。但与此同时，带有暴力镜头的节目充斥整个电视屏幕。年轻人以及整个社会不可避免会受此影响。就我而言，多数情况下，这种影响是消极的。

　　首先，青少年会去模仿电视节目中的暴力与犯罪行为，从而沦为罪犯。谁都不会否认青少年的模仿倾向和能力。他们看到这类镜头，特别是经常看到这类镜头，就会认为这是生活中很普通的事情，加之他们的法律意识淡薄，所以就不会想到这是犯罪，因而就会去模仿，从而触犯法律。现实生活中有太多此类例子，我们自然不必多说了。这类节目对成年人也同样具有消极影响。成年人虽然比青少年具有更强的明辨是非的能力和法律意识，然而，对任何人来讲，任何事情，一旦经常接触便会令人变得麻木、不以为意，危害的种子也就悄然埋下了。事实上，很多成年犯罪也是受到了电影或电视节目的影响。

　　在谈过了此类节目对人的消极影响之后，其对社会的影响也就不言而喻了。因为社会就是由人组成的。当社会上的人都被消极影响后，整个社会是一个什么状况就不堪想象了。现实的例子显示：许多罪犯就是从电视上了解到如何抢劫银行、如何入室盗窃，甚至如何谋杀的。为了防止此类事情发生，政府安全部门不得不雇佣更多的警察来维持秩序，自认也就增加了国家和政府的经济负担。可见，电视节目里的暴力镜头确实会对个人与社会造成消极影响，因此，应该予以严格审查和控制。