关于投诉信的雅思作文范文

  想要取得雅思写作的高分希望大家一定要重视雅思写作高分范文的积累,多多了解一下雅思写作技巧是什么,珠海启德教育小编为大家整理了一些范文,本篇雅思范文是关于投诉信的雅思作文范文,大家一起来看吧。

  Dear Sir or Madam,
  My name is Fan Yang and I was in your store Wednesday last week. Iwould like to bring to your attention an incident that occurred while Iwas in your store.
  I was browsing through the canned soft drinks and noticed aparticularly good brand of almond juice. When I reached andremoved a can to check the contents, the whole shelf collapsed,dumping at least 100 cans of various sorts onto the floor, me andother customers. I was injured and luckily the injury was minor. In myopinion, this resulted entirely from the overloading of the shelves.
  May I suggest that in future during regular maintenance the staffmake sure that the display units are secure and put out fewerproducts in order to prevent a similar accident from happening.
   Yours sincerely,
   Fan Yang

  珠海启德教育老师译文:

  尊敬的先生/女士
  我是杨凡,上周三去过你们商场。当我在商场时发生了事故,希望能引起您的注意。
  当我在商场里面逛的时候,在灌装饮料区发现了一罐比较不错杏仁果汁。当我拿起一罐想看一下它的成分时,整个架子倒了,大概100罐不同的饮料砸落到地板上还有我和其他顾客的身上。我被砸了,幸运的是只是轻伤。我认为,造成这种事故的主要原因是架子超负荷了。
  我建议以后能不能少放一些商品在架子上,然后有店员定期负责确保所有商品摆放安全以防止同类事情再次发生。
谨上
杨帆

  以上就是珠海启德教育小编为您整理的关于投诉信的雅思作文范文,珠海启德小编认为语言都是模仿而来,包括考官本人的英文知识也是日积月累地模仿而来,以珠海启德教育多年的雅思教学经验来看,希望大家永远记住一句话:所有考试都是将合格的学生考出来,而不是将不合格的考生考出去。

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