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SAT素材的分类讲解

  SAT素材的分类讲解
  类别一必备素材一:从失败到成功的故事
  Can something unsuccessful tuna into something good?
  例子重点:失败的细学生范文
  Point: Very true is the saying that failure can teach, us a lot.
  Illustration: Last year, I participated in the election of the president for the student union.Although I thought I had performed confidently, convincingly and calmly, I did not acquire the position(营造失败)Later. I realized that I merely concentrated on the personal manner, emotional eye contact with listeners and other intangible elements while I did not propose concrete expressions, and practical ideas to operate the student union effectively.(营造过渡)Alter recognizing my deficiency, I felt that I became more intelligent and mature despite the unsuccessful experience.(营造成功)
  Explanation: Consequently is the good thing of meaningful and valuable enlightenment that,it arises from unsuccessful things.
  范文点评:本文语言精练,基本结构清晰,但是这个索材非常缺乏细节。硬伤是成功这个点的营造。他写道:“我觉得我变得更聪明.更成熟。但是实际情况是.这样的阐述算不上成功的细节,因为这只是作者内心的想法,并不是事实。
  基本评分:8-9分
  引申话题
  Is memory“,help or“hindrance iii helping us learn from the past anal succeedin the future.这是官方样题里的一个话题,因为配有满分范文.所以拿出来让考生借鉴一下。
  题目翻译:在大家认识过去和获得成功的过程中,记忆是帮助还是阻碍?
  题目分析归类:某些考生可能已经发现,其实这个题目本质上献是从失败到成功的故事。因为记忆可以营造成一段失败的经历—从中学到了经验—进而成功。
  例子重点。memory-失败的经历—learn from the pact从过去中学到了经验—help帮助自己—succeed in the future后成功
  1.总结例子
  It is his willingness to admit his mistakes committed in the pursuit of interest that finally led him into the field of charity as a compensation for his mistakes.
  2.重述观点
  Therefore, it is wise for us to accept our mistakes and more importantly to learn from them.
  关键词:细节充分.逻辑准确,适度点题。
  例子介绍:本文介绍的人物是美国的炼油大王洛克非勒。他年轻时通过兼并等方式获
  取垄断地位.虽然自己获得了利益,但是破坏了很多普通人的幸福。认识到这个错误之后.他开始重新审视自己,之后投身慈善事业.从而弥补了曾经犯下的错误。

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