首先从开头段开始．总体上说开头段的目的是介绍自己的观点并且提示下文，当然比较好是能吸引考官。不过在ＳＡＴ考试短暂的25分钟之内简洁明了无疑是有效率的写作方式．
那么考生的疑惑可能来了。
问题一：简洁明了的开头段应该写点什么
不妨来看OG上几篇风格简洁的６分作文的开头段.
例一 Assignment; Is there always another explanation or point of view?
范文 There is always a "however Each situation has its benefits and its drawbacks. In the field
of market finance, we find a compelling example that supports this thesis,
分析 本段共3句话。首句回答问题，次句解释原因，末句提示下文。
例二 Assignment; Should heroes be defined as people who say what they think when we
ourselves lack the courage to say it?
题目要求是:·是否应该把英雄定义为这样一种人:当我们缺少勇气表这自己看法的
时候，他们却勇干说出自己的想法。
范文
There arc many types of heroes in real 11 or in literature but 'the most courageousness type
of all is the one who is willing to stand up and say what they believe in even when everyone
else hacks this" courage to day . 12 Many people are contention to go through life following the
crowd-' 'They tend to believe iii ideas that society says is right even when they know in
their heart is wrong, . A hero is the one who is willing to give up his position in society in
order to tell people what he believes is right.
分析
这个开头段的整体思路和上文类似，①句给出观点，②③④句给出补充说明〔用的是对比式的方法)。
例三 Assignment: Do you think that ease does not challenge us and that we -need adversity to
help us discover who we are?
题目要求是:顺境无法挑战我们.我们需要逆境来帮助我们自己认清真实的自我.
范文
①Everyone goes through their lives seeing and experiencing different things.②At times.
these different situations may cause one to act differently than another would in the same
Situation。.③I can be readily stated that "'Ease does not challenge us; adversity helps us to
discover who we are““④Through literature, one can see how this stalactital prearms to be true.
分析
①②句是背景，③句是观点，④句是对下文结构的提示.告诉考官准备列举文学方面的例子。
例四 Assignment:Can success be disastrous?
目要求是:成功会不会是灾难性的?
范文
①The power of success can be disastrous when placed in the wrong hand，
②Naturally,there arc those who will always choose to manipulate conditions to succeed in their own endeavors, no、taking into consideration the lives of those around them③On the other hand, there may be those who do not necessarily pursue selfish ends, but simply do not know where to take success once it has been achieved, thus resulting in their own self-sabotage.
分祈
①句是观点.②③是解释或者说是补充说明，并且分成了两种情况描述。第一种情况中成功变成灾难是因为一些人的成功以牺性别人作为代价·另一种情况是一些人成功了.但是却不知道如何去面对成功.所以导致自我毁灭。
例五 Assignment: If you want to become an expert in a certain field, do you need to have more talent or more motivation'?
题目要求是:要成为一个领域的专家，你需要更多天赋还是更大的努力?
范文
①To me. being an expert means being successful, and achieving success requites lots of hard work, tine and practice.
②This is running to drawing, acting to skating, and true regardless of what you pursue, from teaching to dancing.
③Yet expertise and success don't come from skill alone.
④To truly succeed, you need to have at least as much motivation as talent, because if you don’t possess the desire to do something your talent may simply wither from neglect.
⑤And people who prove this to be the case
include .jewel and my sister.
分析 ①②句作者承认技能的重要性。③④向转折承认天赋及后天努力的重要性，并且解释了原因(若没有努力.天赋会逐渐凋谢)。所以观点就是如要成功，天赋和后天的努力同样重姿。⑤这个句子是结构提示，告诉考官下文要列举两个例子。
问题一的回答:综观这些满分作文的开头段.可以得出开头段写作的3大要素:
1.观点
2.解释观点或者说是补充说明
3.结构提示(下文准备列举什么例子)
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