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　　When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school a month in advance, and you are required to write a presentation. Which way do you prefer? 1. To start to work on it right away, so you can work on it a little bit every day. 2. To wait until the end of the month when you have a good idea about the presentation.

　　题型：比较

　　论点：让步

　　角度：利弊分析

　　开头： 选择第一种方式， 马上做， 每天完成一点 。（话题引入 +正反方观点 +自我观点及过渡句）

　　Presentation is not strange to students, which indeed enhance their ability to do research and express ideas. When it comes to the way how students cope with this kind of task, there are usually two approaches: to start working on it at once and to wait until good ideas come into being. As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to embark on the assignment of writing a presentation as soon as possible rather than procrastinating. There are some reasons that illustrate my point of view. （85字）

　　中间段 1：我们可以在做的过程中能不断调整思路 ,后达到理想的效果。 （主题句 +说理论证 +细节例子）

　　First, during the process of writing the presentation, there must be new inspirations that emerge one after another, which help us achieve an ideal result. It is because when we set out to do something, we do not have a choice but to face unexpected problems, and our strategy needs to be adjusted timely according to the changing situation. Imagine that I prepare a topic concerning environment protection with an original idea to blame on car emission, but I find most materials I assembled later more point to new energy automobile, it is better to change my idea to fit for those high quality evidences. （105 字）

　　中间段 2：每 天 做 一 点 能 够 把 压 力 分 解 到 每 一 天 ,不会让自己紧张或压力太 大 。（主题句 +说理论证 +细节例子）

　　In addition, it is a good way to ameliorate the pressure by working on the job a little bit every day. Normally a presentation is a comprehensive and complicated work with tons of materials to read, various people to ask and many discussions to make, which is impossible to be finished within a couple of days. But mission could be done more comfortably and effectively if we can make ourselves a schedule and try to spread the workload across a whole month averagely. For example, for the first 10 days I simply read relevant materials, the middle 10 days I begin to write and last 10 days I discuss the draft with my partners. （114字）

　　让步段 ：每天做 （缺点 ），马上去做一开始不会想到很好的 idea,有可能做很多无用功 ,浪费时间和精力。（打压 ——换一种思路柳暗花明 ），不断走弯路 ,不断犯错也是能力提高的方式 。（承认主观点也有漏洞 +堵漏）

　　Admittedly, working on the assignment right away can have one or two downsides. For instance, due to lack of whole scenario, people usually do not come up with brilliant idea at the very beginning and there could be a big waste of time and energy. Nevertheless, making mistakes can be another road to success, because we are likely to find the best solution by trials and errors. （67字）

　　结尾：重申观点 +归纳理由 /升华主题

　　In conclusion, my preference for working on the job immediately is clearly justified through abovementioned reasons and examples. I am a big fan of a motto that goes, “to blossom in action or to wither in waiting”。 Let's take action right away, and never let our life slip through our fingers. （51 字）