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托福满分作文应如何开头

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托福满分作文应如何开头

托福满分作文应如何开头?很多考生在第一段就出现错误,甚至歪曲了原题目的意思,整篇围绕一个错误的观点展开。这样的独立写作,当然不能得高分。所以说托福作文开头是写作部分高分与否的关键。


托福满分作文应如何开头

1.用副词开头

(1) 副词修饰全句

Luckily, he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me.

Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester.

Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.

修饰全句常用的副词有:

obviously / undoubtedly

apparently / fortunately

clearly / unfortunately

incredibly / luckily

unluckily / surprisingly

frighteningly

这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法,在意思上相等与 “It is ... 形容词that ...” 。

举个例子:

Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test.

Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.

(2) 强调副词

Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.

Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street.

Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.

(3) 副词表示某一领域

Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world.

Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.

2.用插入语开头

表示说话人的态度,或使句子的意思更加准确

Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.

Generally speaking, winter in Vancouver is gloomy.

类似的插入语有:

no wonder,no doubt

in other words,in my opinion

in conclusion,in fact

s a matter of fact

3.用形容词、并列形容词或形容词短语开头

修饰句子的主语,表示主语的特征或状态

Frantic, the young mother rushed out the door with the baby in her arms.

Tasty and crisp, potato chip are a favorite snack for both children and adults.

Happy at his good marks at school, the little boy skipped on his way home.

Desperate and hopeless, the poor man committed suicide.

4.用分词、分词短语开头

(1) 修饰句子主语,表示主语所处的状态或主语同时进行的另一个较谓语动词次要的动作。

Scared, the girl moved timidly and cautiously into the dark room.( 状态)

Chased by my dear pet cat, the mouse dashed into a small hole.( 状态 )

Spoiled by his parents, the naughty boy always insists on things he wants.( 状态)

Puffing and hugging, he finished his run.( 另一动作)

Looking at herself in the mirror, she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一动作)

(2) 修饰谓语动词,表示原因、时间等。

Lying down on the couch, he felt much relaxed.( 时间)

Feeling bored, she turned on the TV and switched from channel to channel.( 原因)

Wanting to find out the business hour, she called the store.( 原因)

Having completed the form, he mailed it out immediately.( 时间)

5.用介词短语开头

表示句子谓语动词发生的时间、地点、方式、原因、条件

On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window

pretending to look at something there.( 时间)

Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地点)

Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)

Due to the limit of seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)

In case of fire, use the stairways.( 条件)

6.动词不定式开头

强调谓语动词动作的目的

To celebrate the arrival of the Millennium, we held a grand party in the hotel.

To show my trust on him, I deposited $ 10,000 into his bank account.

7.用独立分词短语开头

使句子有正式的味道

Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.

Sea gulls flying over the water, the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.

A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.

8.用副词从句开头

表示主句谓语动词发生的时间、地点、原因、方式、条件

When you are in need of help, give me a call.

Wherever you go, I follow.

Since your children love hamburgers and fries, we might as well eat in MacDonald.

As if it were summer, everybody wear shorts and a T-shirt.

In case that you get lost, call me at this number.

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托福写作如何做到时间够用

夯实基础

针对全部的托福考生而言,考试是没有什么捷径,为关键的还是夯实自己的基础。但是针对托福写作而言基础的环节能够划分成2块,是审题、第二就是打字。若到了托福写作时不可以快速和明确的审题,不不可以把自己的写作速度提升,并且整篇文章的质量还会下降。而对于题目不熟的考生,建议大家可以仔细研究近三年托福考试写作部分的机经,每道题目都列出提纲,矫正逻辑偏差和理解误差。

明确结构

若看过托福写作的要求,相信考生们是清楚,托福立写作同样是有这样的要求:“文章结构合理,论证展开充分,并具有一致性、统一性。”因此若想提升文章的质量和速度,文章的整理结构和速度是非常重要的。

时间控制

当大家初入托福写作的环节中,建议一定要刻意用30分钟把一篇文章完成,还需要把重点都放到完整的写完一篇文章。但在大家通过一段时间的练习时候,就一定要去严控自己要在30分中内容把整篇文章的写作完成。切勿放松对时间的要求,用60分钟或是更长的时间完成一篇文章,只会给自己制造一些假象,看似一切良好,但却不利于在考场上发挥水平。

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托福写作字数是多才好吗

托福写作不是文采竞赛

每一篇文章都会有人去阅读它的,但首先大家要想的问题就是:究竟是我们的读者,他们期待想要看见哪些?想了解如何提高托福写作的相关信息,请登录环球教育官网。

针对托福考试而言,我们的作文,读者非常少,对大家写作的期待同样是不算高。

托福考试回归本质依然就是一个标准化的语言考试,大家读者就只有阅卷人,那因为是阅卷人,肯定是有一系列标准化的准则来规范他们的评分。

因此达到这些要求即可,毕竟它不是托福英语风采竞赛。

托福写作不是手速竞赛

首先有一种传说一直存在:托福写作,字数越多越好。

针对如此的说法是不可以全盘否定,但大家还要小心对待这样的观点。

关键点就是在你一句话的信息量。

同样一句话有的人能够包含有多个信息点,而有一些人只可以颠来倒去说同一件事,这和人本身的表述习惯有关,不过当我们非母语去表达的时候,一句话的信息量会锐减。

因此普遍意义上而言综合在270左右,立在450左右能够把该表达的表达清楚。

如果只是无脑追求字数,那很容易逻辑不清,语法错误变多,单词拼写错误变多,废话变多,会导致观感非常差。

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