关于私家车增多的雅思作文范文

　　What are the advantages and disadvantages of the development of private cars?

　　你认为日益增多的私家车有哪些益处和弊端？

　　With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.

　　Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.

　　However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents which have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

　　In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society,they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therefore I am against developing private cars.

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　　深圳启德教育资深老师解析：辩论型题目，必须使用对称式结构。范文写了四段，第一段总写题目，引出下文的两种不同观点，第二段写汽车的优势，第三段写的是私家车带来的一系列问题，后一段说出自己的观点同第三段的看法相同，反对在发展中国家发展私家车。全文举例充分，理由充分，语言很好。

　　在中国随着在工业和经济方面飞速发展，拥有私家车的人数正在不断上升。有些人已经拥有自己的私家车，还有一些人正在计划着购买汽车。但是，对于这种现象有两个不同的观点。

　　有人认为，汽车会带来很多好处。首先，汽车行业为无数工人提供了就业机会，并且也帮助了其他行业的发展。其次，如果条件允许，拥有一辆汽车可以使我们更高效地工作。后，生活会变得更加便利。汽车可以自由移动，而且有了私家车就不用在寒冷的冬日或在炎炎烈日下等待巴士了。

　　但是，有一部分人坚决反对在发展中国家增加私家车。他们认为，汽车将会产生一系列的问题。首先，随着汽车的大量生产，行驶在大街上的汽车也会越来越多，有毒气体将会大量排放，污染大气，并终损害人类的健康。其次，私家车带来的舒适和自由往往被交通堵塞带来的沮丧所取代。后一个问题是日益增多的交通事故所造成的死亡，将会继续倾刻间夺去许多人的生命。

　　在我看来，尽管汽车在我们的社会生活中充当着一个重要的角色，但是，它们也给我们带来了许多的麻烦，比如严重的环境污染，频繁的交通事故和大量的能源消耗。它们消耗了大量的燃料，同时抛出了大量的污染物。每年的交通意外造成数千人的死亡和更多人的残疾。交通堵塞浪费了我们大量的宝贵时间。因此，我反对在发展中国家发展私家车。