关于工厂转移的雅思作文范文

　　Moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside could solve traffic and housing problems in major cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

　　把公司迁移到乡村以缓解城市住房和交通压力。在多大程度上你同意或反对此观点呢？

　　Like a disease that troubles the patients, traffic and housing problems in almost every metropolis are what governments must address without any delay. But, how? One theory claims big companies and factories should be moved to the hinterland. Although it sounds plausible, the theory is not essentially flawless.

　　To begin with, it is entirely wrong to attribute city housing and traffic problems to big companies and factories. Why? The area that big factories and companies occupy usually accounts for the less than 15% of the whole city state. Hence, big companies and factories contribute little to housing and traffic problems. Moreover, the number of the employees of big companies and factories is not large enough to give rise to traffic and housing problems.

　　Next, to move big companies and factories does not solve the housing and traffic problems completely. In fact, it harms rather than helps city economic development by shifting the problems from city to countryside. Once the big companies and factories are moved to the suburb, schools, banks, hospitals,raw material supplies and the like will also stream into the countries. When the system becomes a flood,a new city comes into being. Then, the old problems reappear in the “new cities.” In addition, it is these big companies and factories that trigger and lead the city economic development. To remove them,product and services are expensive. Hence, to move them to the countries makes little sense.

　　To sum up, I do not agree that big companies and factories should be moved to the countryside. To solve the problem more effectively and efficiently, governments and scholars should consider more insightfully and seriously.

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　　如同困扰患者的疾病一样，政府对于大都市的交通及住房问题的解决刻不容缓。但这些问题应如何解决呢？一种观点认为，大型公司及工厂应该移至城市腹地。这种观点虽然听上去不错，事实上却并不完美。

　　首先，将城市的住房和交通问题归咎于大型公司及工厂是完全错误的。为什么呢？大型工厂及公司的占地面积通常小于整个城市面积的15%。因此，大型公司及工厂对于住房及交通的影响是很小的。另外，大型公司及工厂的员工人数并不足以加剧交通及住房的问题。

　　再者，转移大型公司及工厂并不能完全解决住房和交通问题。事实上，将城市问题转移至农村不但不会带动城市经济的发展，反而会对经济的发展带来负面影响。一旦大型公司和工厂移至郊区，那么像学校、银行、医院、法院这样的机构都会涌进农村。当一个完整的体系形成时，一座新的城市就诞生了。然后，老问题就会在“新城市”中再次上演了。另外，正是这些大型公司及工厂引领着城市经济的快速发展。它们的转移，将使产品和服务的经济负担加重。因此，将它们移至农村没有任何意义。

　　总之，我反对将大型公司及工厂转移到农村的观点。如果要有效地解决这些现存问题，政府和学者就需要进行更深刻、更认真的思考。