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雅思大作文高分怎么写

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雅思 大作文高分怎么写

在雅思写作中,一切的写作技巧都不如对写作的细节把握。在平时的写作练习中,考生可以根据雅思写作评分标准来衡量自己的写作水平,下面是小编搜集整理的关于雅思大作文高分怎么写的资料,欢迎查阅。

雅思大作文高分怎么写

一:拒绝无谓的单词和词组

1.一些不必要的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉。

比如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为:

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

2.替换无聊的表达,故意写出复杂的长难句,但是让整个句子显得特别冗长,其实并不会给你的雅思作文加分。

例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

二:拒绝重复词汇和表达

1.雅思写作评分标准中有一点:丰富性。很多考生做不到在写作中使用更丰富的词汇和表达,也就与高分失之交臂。有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。

例如下面这个例子:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。

large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改为:

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。

更简洁的表达方式为:

My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换

例如:My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm。

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雅思写作怎样才能有深度

有新意的表达离不开辞藻的堆砌,不是说让你将一些新奇的词语一股脑儿的全部用上,而是在适当的时候用有新意的词语会让阅卷人有眼前一亮的感觉。

新鲜的词语哪里来?当然是积累了,单词一直都是考雅思的考生们必过的关卡,毕竟“包里有粮,心里不慌”。

你能够将高中的词汇量和大学的词汇量全部掌握,大概4000-5000个词左右,基本写作也是没有什么问题了。

除了基础单词的掌握外,我们在写作的时候要运用一些“小心机”。

一是学会变换词性,比如说 “fluctuate”,“fluctuation” 和“fluctuating”,我们的考生就会认为是同一个词,都表示波动、起伏。但是在考官眼里,这是三个词。

它们虽然表达同样的意思,但是分别是用了动词、名词、形容词,是不同的词!所以,这是一个扩充词汇量的突破口,在我们原有词汇的基础上,进行词性的变换。

二是学会反义词的应用,比如A商品比B商品好用,也可以说成B商品没有A商品好用,这样的逆向思维,会让人多花时间揣摩。

三是同义词的替换。比如Oppose to = object to = against,Claim = state = assert = argue。一些平常词用多了就没有新意了,相反用同义词去替换会让人觉得你是一个有“水准”的考生。

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雅思写作大作文练习题

1 Modern technology has made it possible for people to view exhibitions at home so museums and art galleries will disappear soon. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 Education is increasingly important for a nation. Some people think the government should decide what students study in university. Others think students should study what they prefer. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

3 Some people think the government should stop putting money in art programs and put the money in more important fields such as sports facilities, medical care or national defense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思写作大作文练习题

4. Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problem of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?

5 The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

6 People who move to a new country should accept the new culture as their own. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7. Many languages are dying out every r. Some people think that our lives will be simpler with fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

8.Some people believe that university students should study science, other thinks that they should study what their heart desires. Discuss, what is your opinion?

9 Some governments spend vast sums of money on self-defense. Some people think they should spend the money on reducing poverty and other disadvantages rather than on weapons. To what extent do you agree?

10 Some people think zoos should be closed because they are cruel to animals. To what extent do you agree?

以上就是10道雅思写作大作文练习题,同学们在模拟练习的时候,要注意雅思写作大作文的逻辑主线以及用词和用句的丰富度,这些都会对分数产生比较大的影响,此外,不要忘记限制时间,对于时间的把握在雅思写作大作文练习中也是非常必要和重要的。

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雅思作文的失分点在哪里

首先,Task response(任务回应),四大评分项目之首,其实他考验的就是你对于题目的分析究竟准确不准确,因为一旦你有误差,你就会跑题,这肯定会造成非常大的失分。举个例子:

Do you agree or disagree? Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? (学生是不是应该在上大学之前花一年时间在工作或旅行上?)其实对于这个话题,学生们一般都很容易想到这一年的优点,例如:开拓视野;增加工作经验。

但是对于缺点,有很多学生就会有一些误差了,有些学生可能会说,这是很浪费时间的,因为这些学生很可能会和朋友们一起鬼混,吃喝玩乐。

其实呢,在这里,我们亲爱的同学们就已经跑题了,因为,即使你说间隔年是浪费时间的,在这里你的原因也不该说是鬼混吃喝玩乐。因为,在题目中,我们已经限定,我们的这一年是花在工作和旅行上。所以,你的理由,更应该是关于这一年在工作或旅行上可能带来的问题,而刚刚那个回答,明显是和题目的限定有偏差的。

所以,对于同学们,咱们在写一篇作文之前,一定要认认真真分析题目,注意审题,看看在题目中,有没有限定的背景,限定的趋势,以及限定的对象。因为你的一个小马虎,很可能就是你跑题失分的开端。

再者呢,就是lexical resource(词汇丰富程度),虽然他的字面翻译是丰富程度,但其实对于写作来说,还有一个更重要的考察项,就是单词准确性;只有在准确的基础上,你才能再考虑我们更加高端的词汇。举个例子:对与rise和arise,很多学生都以为他们是不及物动词,做“上升”含义,但是其实,他俩在文中的表述含义是大相径庭的;rise一般会用做The sun rises,而arise 更偏向于一个问题或者有一个现象的“出现”。

另外,英语中,其实有很多很“词伙”,这些词伙对于单词的考察,并不是一股脑的对于高端词汇的使用,而是怎么样用词搭配。例如,对于“获得技能”这个词组,比较好的翻译是“acquire abilities”,因为,acquire的含义就是:经过努力所获得(知识或技能)。

因此,如何去提高我们对单词的准确性和丰富性的使用呢?在这里老师有两个方法推荐你们使用。1. 单词的汉译英:很多单词大家都是记型记忆,也就是看见英语,可以想的起中文,但是,当需要中文单词翻译成英文单词时,大家就卡壳了,就像“有争议性的”,你能一秒想起它的英文对照controversial吗?

所以,如果想在写作时有单词可写,现在一定要好好进行单词的汉译英背诵,这里大学英语四级单词,王陆807写作词汇都是不错的推荐。

单词的例句理解:这是很容易被忽略的一点,但是其实,单词的例句能够很好地告诉你一些单词的衍生,词伙搭配,以及使用语境;这些毫无疑问会让你的学术表达更加精确和地道;除此之外,多看例句也可以帮你加深对单词的理解。

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