关于父母与学校的雅思作文范文

　　Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　有些人认为父母应该教育孩子如何成为好的社会成员。然而另外一些人认为学校应该做这件事情。讨论这两种见解并且给出你的观点。

　　Recently, there is a tendency for parents to attach greater importance to their children's education.Some people take the view that parents should take the responsibility of conducting their children's behaviour, and telling them what is right from wrong, while others advocate that it is the school's responsibility.

　　People who hold the opinion that the school should shoulder the major responsibility to educate children have some sound reasons. In the first place, most of the children's waking time is spent in schools, and their purpose to attend school is to receive education. Secondly, the parents of the children pay for the education of their children, so they have the rights to receive corresponding services. As an institution of education, the school has the sole responsibility to educate the young generation. Finally, there are well-equipped facilities and well-trained teachers in schools. The school provides an environment, in which children can not only master knowledge and skills, but also learn how to adapt themselves to the society and how to become responsible citizens.

　　However, the other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying that the parents should assume the main duty of children's education. First of all, the parents know their children more than the school does, and they know what to teach and in what way it can be accepted. The parents function as the first teachers of their children so that they should be responsible for the education of their children. In the second place, it is beneficial to teach children in accordance with their specific features. However, in school, each child gets inadequate individual attention, and sometimes his particular needs are passed over.

　　Admittedly, there are merits to both arguments. From my own perspective, I would like to take a more balanced position. Schools and parents are both essential to children's allround development and they should take the responsibility together. They should make joint efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere conducive to children's healthy growth.

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　　北京环球雅思资深老师解析：题目类型：辩论型题目。题目要求中有“Discuss both these views”，所以文章必须使用对称式结构。范文使用对称式结构， 写了四段。第一段写了两句话。第一句介绍背景。第二句介绍双方 观点。第二段写学校应该负责教育孩子。第三段写父母应该负责教育孩子。第四段提出自己的观点，采取折中方案：学校和父母都应该负责教育孩子。全篇文章语言很好。

　　近，父母们更重视他们孩子的教育。有些人认为父母应负责规范子女的言行，并教导他们如何分辨是非。有些人则认为这是学校的责任。

　　认为学校应该承担主要教育责任的人有以下一些理由。第一，孩子的绝大多数时间是在学校度过的，他们去学校的目的是接受教育。第二，家长为他们孩子的教育付钱，所以孩子有权利接受相应的服务。作为一个教育机构，学校有责任教育年轻的一代。后，学校有装备良好的设施和训练有素的教师。学校提供了一个环境，孩子们在其中不仅能掌握知识和技能，而且能学会如何适应社会，并且成为负责任的公民。

　　然而，另一方强烈反对，他们认为父母应该承担教育孩子的主要责任。首先，家长比学校老师更了解他们的孩子，而且知道应该教孩子什么和以何种方式教孩子能更加容易地让孩子接受。父母是孩子的第一个老师，所以他们应该负责孩子的教育。第二，因材施教对孩子是有益的。然而，在学校，孩子无法得到个别的关照，有时他们的特殊需求会被忽视。

　　我们必须承认，双方都有道理。就我个人而言，我愿意持有一个更中庸的立场。学校和父母对孩子的全面发展都很重要。他们应该一起承担责任。他们应该做出共同努力来创造一个有利于孩子健康成长的和谐环境。